Evaluation On Prelim
I believe that the prelim was successful ,however there could be a few improvements
Improvements that could of had been made are things such as camera angles, editing, mise en scene and sound .In our prelim the synopsis was about two young students walking through corridor as a stalker is following behind them. The students then go into a room and have a conversation.
Making the prelim was very effective because it was good practise in using the techniques we ere taught such as using camera, practising different camera angles etc. We used Final Cut Pro to edit the prelim, which helped me to learn different features about it, which help me to edit my thriller opening.
Camera
I think the use of the camera angles we used in our prelim was successful. We used different camera angles such as long shot as the students and stalker walk down corridor, panning as they walk into the room and lastly over shoulder as the two students have a conversation. We also used these camera angles correctly.
Editing
We did not have many editing techniques in our prelim and therefore think that the next time we film we should use more editing as it would be more effective. An example of an edit that we could use is
shot reverse shot when the two character were talking. This would of had been more effective as there two people were having a conversation and therefore having a shot reverse shot would of had a closer capture of there facial expression and will make the more scene more effective.
Mise En Scene
When making our prelim we did not need any props as it was a simple synopsis. However if we had the chance to do it again I think that we should use a prop such as a mask for the stalker. This is because it would be more effective as the identity of the stalker will not of had been revealed.
Sound
The only sound that we used in our prelim was the diegetic sound of the two students talking. I think that to improve our prelim it would be more effective if we used non diegetic sound such as back ground music, this will engage the audience into watching it.