Thursday, 14 February 2013

Pitch: Slideshow After Feedback/Final Outline

  PITCH NEEDS EDITING!!!!!!!
Pitch improvment from asmediaset


This is an improved various of our previous pitch. Our main criticism was on the plot of our action-thriller. It was named, 'to complicated', so we went back and rethought, coming up with similar ideas but a simpler concept. (Includes treatment for the whole film, target audience, location and props)

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